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Story Audit
My writing has gotten exponentially better over the course of these past few months. Not because I acquired a new vocabulary, or became an expert on grammar. Instead, it is because I became better at making MY OWN argument. Upon signing up for Writing 101: Storybuilding, I assumed we were literally going to primarily write traditional, fairy tale style stories for the duration of the semester. But instead, I found myself drawing comics and sketching ballrooms. What did I learn from it all? That formulating a legitimate, unbiased argument is telling a story. The ability to take your reader through the journey of educating them on the issue, entering a conversation on the topic, and making a claim to back up is a skill, an art that often goes unnoticed. This course is what helped me realize the existence of this skill, and the secrets to it. When I first started this course, I was so hesitant to voice my own opinions that I literally copied the template that we were told to use word for word into my opening paragraph. I had been taught to avoid using I in argumentative essay, even when asserting a claim/thesis. To me, no “I” meant no personal anecdotes, originality, or experience. But one of the first things that I was told during peer review sessions for my essay was that my writing was very smooth and cohesive, however it lacked conviction that my claims needed to hold substance. My professor, and classmates both agreed that the best way to fix this was to bring my own voice, and my own experiences into my writing more often to help validate my arguments. So, with that in mind, I went back and talked about my use of Quizlet online as an educational tool, and from then on my writing improved substantially. I also learned how scholarly writing is entering a conversation with other scholars. You are almost never the first person to write about a topic or discuss it. So researching, educating yourself through your predecessors work, and then mentioning these articles, books etc. in your piece is essential in preparing your argument and thesis. So that started to show itself in my second essay talking about Alison Bechdel’s graphic memoir, “Fun Home.”Such knowledge will help me continue to improve my scholarly writing for future courses and beyond. One thing that I plan to explore more in the future is the ability to place your thesis into different places throughout your essay based on the points or arguments you are trying to make. It has been an unexpected pleasure to take this course in my first semester. I hope to build upon my knowledge as I continue to grow as a writer.
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Rehabilitation and Re-Entry For Convicts
In their books Just Mercy, and The New Jim Crow, Bryan Stevenson and Michelle Alexander list and elaborate upon the injustices and disparity intertwined in America’s criminal justice system. Of the many issues they discuss, I will be focusing on rehabilitation services, their availability and the effect they have on prisoners. Rehabilitation services include therapy, counseling, job training, and even education for prisoners. In their articles, Sean Miller and Eileen Fisher claim that such services can play an essential role in the lives of convicts. Not only do they argue that they help prisoners re-enter society with control of their life as they prepare to deal with the thousands of legal restrictions that convicts face once out of jail. But they state they can keep convicts from slipping back into old ways that got them sentenced to prison in the first place, thus, keeping them out of the prison system after their first offense. Yet, despite the proven benefits, government on all levels and private prisons alike fail to offer the aforementioned services to convicts both in, and out of jail. What does this suggest about the government, and other leaders of our prison system? In his article, Stephanos Bibas talks about how prisons make a considerable amount of money for these organizations and entities. So is it possible that not offering rehabilitation services could be to keep the prisoners in the system for profit? While Eileen Fisher believes that it is all of american society who is to blame for “failing its prisoners” by not consistently offering them rehabilitation services. I would like to specifically call out our government and heads of the criminal justice system for their absence, and true intentions regarding this issue.
Whether it is their first time, or they are a repeat offender, living in american prisons is not beneficial to the prisoner. The people involved (prison guards, wardens, attorneys, and government officials etc.) are increasingly corrupt, the living conditions are often not up to standard, and the chance to begin reconstructing prisoners’ lives isn’t even offered in most cases. Eileen Fisher describes multiple different instances in which undesirable circumstances in jail negatively affect prisoners. On the issue of corruption, she states:
What we didn’t expect to find was pervasive corruption and systems too overwhelmed to offer desperately needed services that give ex-convicts a fighting chance to succeed in the outside world.
We learned of inmates who worked with prison guards to deal drugs. We heard about others who used drugs for the first time while incarcerated. Instead of getting rehab, those who came in addicted often got worse. We found inmates who used their time not to gain a trade but to learn how to more craftily commit crimes upon release.
In a place where prisoners are supposed to pay a debt to society and begin rebuilding their lives, unfavorable circumstances make it more difficult to complete such tasks. Instead, it becomes easier to slip back into old habits like the aforementioned drug abuse, and distribution. Such issues can be even more worrisome when there’s more individuals available to be influenced. With a 700% increase in prison populations over the last 40 years, many prisons are overcrowded, and understaffed (Miller). With that in mind, it could make sense why such corruption and poor living can take place. In the case that there is an inmate looking to begin their rehabilitation while still in jail, such services are rarely offered due to lack of prison funding (Fisher). If they are offered, it is usually through some sort of religious group, making it so only those who practice that religion can benefit from the services unless one is willing to convert (Miller). Combining the poor living conditions, the overflow of prisons, and the unequal availability of rehabilitation services, convicts are almost left with no choice but to wait until they are out of prison to get their lives right.
Outside of jail, the situation awaiting an ex-convict is far from ideal. Although the number is on the decline, there are roughly 48,000 legal restrictions on criminals nationwide (Fisher). These restrictions range everywhere from housing and residency, to the workforce and voting rights (Fisher). In fact, in the state of Michigan, incarceration for a year or more results in a 24% lower chance to get a job (Bibas). So even before even having the chance to do anything right or wrong upon serving their sentence, convicts are placed in a caste system in which they are second-class citizens. One would think that with all the odds stacked against them, convicts would have a plethora of rehabilitation organizations and companies offering to both help re-enter society, and recover from the traumas of prison. But sadly, in most states, this is not the case. It becomes even more unfortunate when realizing that in the instances where these services were actually available to convicts as resources (vocational skills, education opportunities, family counseling, and therapy sessions, etc.), they had great success in accomplishing such tasks. For example, Sean Miller gives praise to the Amity Foundation based in California for their work. In the case of one Mr. John Cadogan, a low-security felon, Amity Foundation’s counselor, Mona Velasquez, helps Cadogan not only distance himself from the drug addiction that got him locked up, but navigate his relationship with his girlfriend, who is still a recreational drug abuser. Workers like Velasquez “believe that drug treatment, counseling, and other programs like the one at Chino greatly improve the chances of prisoners becoming productive members of society. They see such programs as better than keeping offenders locked up, or locking up low-risk prisoners to begin with, which can just harden inmates (Miller).” Going as far as claiming that locking up prisoners is unnecessary is far fetched. But considering the thousands of legal restrictions set up for convicts, and the recent success with rehabilitation services, it seems obvious that convicts would benefit greatly from any services they could be offered (if not inside, then outside of prisons).
Analyzing the pros and cons of rehabilitation services and their proven positive effects on a convict’s status in society, as well as their overall post-sentence health, it may seem like the best choice would be to make these services readily available nationwide. So this begs the question: Why aren’t these services offered more consistently? The simple answer would be the aforementioned underfunding of prison systems. But scholars like Bibas believe that the answer stretches deeper than that. One of his main claims is that the true purpose of american prisons has changed significantly:
Historically, colonial America punished crimes swiftly but temporarily. Only a few convicts were hanged, exiled, or mutilated. Most paid a fine, were shamed in the town square, sat in the stocks or pillory, or were whipped; all of these punishments were brief. Having condemned the crime, the colonists then forgave the criminal, who had paid his debt to society and the victim.
That was in keeping with the colonists’ Christian faith in forgiveness, and it meant there was no permanent underclass of ex-cons.
Having said this, Bibas argues that with all the money earned from prisons, financial gain has become the main purpose of imprisonment. From this point of view, it makes sense to point out that more prisoners in cells equals more money for prison corporations. Therefore, by not offering rehabilitation services to convicts, and making it easier for criminals to slip back into criminal habits, prisons systems set their victims up to end up right back in a cell; a cycle that continues to put money in the prison system’s pocket. A theory so controversial as this may shed some light on the mind-boggling statistic that 75% of criminals will end up back in the prison system within 5 years of their initial release.
On the other side of this argument are those who believe such rehabilitation services are unnecessary for prisoners. From this more unforgiving lens, many, particularly the political right side, are a big proponent of freedoms of our society in this country. They believe that it is the criminal’s irresponsible choosing of criminal activity that got them into such a mess, so it shouldn’t be up to society, government or anyone else but themselves to get out of the mess they created. However, it is the people, organizations, and groups/parties with this mindset that tend to look at a criminal’s actions for what they are instead of focusing on the circumstances surrounding it. In the many cases from their respective books, Michelle Alexander and Bryan Stevenson contextualize the crime with the offender’s family, emotional, financial, and whatever other forms of history could affect the individual’s behavior. Instantly, although the crimes themselves may be legally inexcusable, the individuals don’t seem as evil, or dangerous as I’m sure they were originally framed to be. It is important to realize that a lot of criminals are products of their environment, and the circumstances in which they live. So offering little to no help in terms of rehabilitation is about as unfair as the circumstances that a lot of these individuals were born into. In the words of Bryan Stevenson, “we all need mercy, we all need justice, and-perhaps- we all need some measure of unmerited grace” (18). And quite frankly, the opposing point of view, whether it be conservatives, or the judicial system, often does not even consider these factors when dealing with convicts in the rehabilitation phase of the process.
Works Cited:
-Rivers, Eileen. “Re-Entry into Society, or Back to Prison?” USA Today, Gannett Satellite Information Network, 31 Dec. 2017, https://www.usatoday.com/story/opinion/policing/reentry/column/2017/12/29/reentry-incarceration-corruption-prison-barriers-recidivism-policing-usa/979903001/.
-ALEXANDER, MICHELLE. NEW JIM CROW: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness. NEW PRESS, 2020.
-Bibas, Stephanos. “The Truth about Mass Incarceration.” National Review, National Review, 2 Oct. 2015, https://www.nationalreview.com/2015/09/mass-incarceration-prison-reform/.
-Miller, Sean. “US Prison Inmates Returning to Society: How Will They Be Received?” The Christian Science Monitor, The Christian Science Monitor, 20 May 2012, https://www.csmonitor.com/USA/Justice/2012/0520/US-prison-inmates-returning-to-society-How-will-they-be-received.
-STEVENSON, BRYAN. JUST MERCY: a Story of Justice and Redemption. SCRIBE PUBLICATIONS, 2020.
National Geographic Website Evaluation
Website Evaluation
Site: https://www.nationalgeographic.com/
Authored By: National Geographic Partners, LLC.
Who is the intended audience?:
The intended audience for this website spans from a variety of demographics. But in short, the website is specifically for nature-lovers, history junkies, photographers, and world travelers of all ages, and experience levels respectively.
What kind of information is the author presenting?:
The author is presenting information mainly about what they do as an organization (their mission statement), and what you as a supporter/follower can do to help their cause. They also provide ways to subscribe, follow, participate in, or learn about their various mediums through which they present a lot of their information, including magazines, television, online articles, museums, photography and many other areas of media.
Is the platform design well suited for the chosen materials and audience? That is, is it easy for the user to navigate, search, and find answers? How so, how not so? How can you improve it?
The website is well designed in some areas, but could use some minor adjustments in others. They listed the information on the main page in order of relevance. And after providing information or attention-grabbing graphics about the topic, they provide links to more in depth pages on the subjects. But when you think about it, since this website and organization has such a wide age range, perhaps providing information online may not be the most effective tool for speaking to the older portion of their target market. However, considering the majority of the target market are avid users of the internet, it’s still the most effective means of information presentation. In terms of navigation, the only small adjustment I would make would to the architecture of the website would be to make the “Menu” tab on the top of the page larger, and more central on the top. That tab is actually the easiest way to navigate the website, so it should be more of a focal point.
Rehabilitation For American Convicts
In their books Just Mercy, and The New Jim Crow, Bryan Stevenson and Michelle Alexander list and elaborate upon the injustices and disparity intertwined in America’s criminal justice system. Of the many issues they discuss, I will be focusing on rehabilitation services, their availability and effect on prisoners. Rehabilitation services include therapy, counseling, job training, and even education for prisoners. In their articles, Sean Miller and Eileen Fisher claim that such services can play an essential role in the lives of convicts and prisoners. Not only do they appear to help prisoners re-enter society with control of their life as they prepare to deal with the thousands of legal restrictions that convicts face once out of jail. But they claim they can keep convicts from slipping back into old ways that got them sentenced to prison in the first place, and thus, keep them out of the prison system for good after their first offense. Yet, despite the proven benefits, many governments and private prisons alike fail to offer the aforementioned services to convicts both in, and out of jail. What does this suggest about the government, and other leaders of our prison system? In his article, Stephanos Bibas talks about how prisons make a considerable amount of money for these organizations and entities. So is it possible that not offering rehabilitation services could be to keep the prisoners in the system that makes government so much money? While Eileen Fisher believes that it is all of american society who is to blame for “failing its prisoners” by not consistently offering them rehabilitation services. I would like to specifically call out our government and heads of the criminal justice system for their absence, and true intentions regarding this issue.
Whether it is their first time, or they are a repeat offender, living in american prisons is not beneficial to the prisoner. The people involved are corrupt, the living conditions are often not up to standard, and the chance to begin reconstructing prisoners’ their lives isn’t even offered yet in most cases. Eileen Fisher describes multiple different instances in which undesirable circumstances in jail negatively affect its prisoners. On the issue of corruption, she states:
What we didn’t expect to find was pervasive corruption and systems too overwhelmed to offer desperately needed services that give ex-convicts a fighting chance to succeed in the outside world.
We learned of inmates who worked with prison guards to deal drugs. We heard about others who used drugs for the first time while incarcerated. Instead of getting rehab, those who came in addicted often got worse. We found inmates who used their time not to gain a trade but to learn how to more craftily commit crimes upon release.
In a place where prisoners are supposed to pay a debt to society, and begin rebuilding their lives, unfavorable circumstances make it more difficult to complete such tasks. Instead, it becomes easier to slip back into old habits like drug abuse, and distribution. With the 700% increase in prison populations over the last 40 years, many prisons are overcrowded, and consequently, understaffed (Miller). With that in mind, it could make sense why such corruption and poor living can take place. In the case that there is an inmate looking to begin their rehabilitation while still in jail, such services are rarely offered due to lack of prison funding (Fisher). If they are offered, it is usually through some sort of religious group, making it so only those who practice that religion can benefit from the services unless one is willing to convert (Miller). Combining the poor living conditions, the overflow of prisons, and the unequal availability of rehabilitation services, convicts are almost left with no choice but to wait until they are out of prison to get their lives right.
Outside of jail, the situation awaiting an ex-convict is far from ideal. Although the number is on the decline, there are roughly 48,000 legal restrictions on criminals nationwide (Fisher). These restrictions range everywhere from housing and residency, to the workforce and voting rights (Fisher). In fact, in the state of Michigan, incarceration for a year or more results in a 24% lower chance to get a job (Bibas). So even before even having the chance to do anything right or wrong upon serving their sentence, convicts are placed in a caste system in which they are second-class citizens. One would think that with all the odds stacked against them, convicts would have a plethora of rehabilitation organizations and companies offering to both help re-enter society, and recover from the traumas of prison. But sadly, in most states, this is not the case. It becomes even more unfortunate when realizing that in the instances where these services were actually available to convicts as resources (vocational skills, education opportunities, family counseling, and therapy sessions, etc.) they had great success in accomplishing such tasks. For example, Sean Miller gives praise to the Amity Foundation based in California for their work. In the case of one Mr. John Cadogan, low-security felon, Amity Foundation’s counselor Mona Velasquez helps Cadogan not only distance himself from the drug addiction that got him locked up, but navigate his relationship with his girlfriend, who is still a recreational drug abuser. Miller states that workers like Velasquez “believe that drug treatment, counseling, and other programs like the one at Chino greatly improve the chances of prisoners becoming productive members of society. They see such programs as better than keeping offenders locked up, or locking up low-risk prisoners to begin with, which can just harden inmates.” Going as far as claiming that locking up prisoners is unnecessary is far fetched. But considering the thousands of legal restrictions set up for convicts, and the recent success with rehabilitation services, it seems obvious that convicts would benefit greatly from any services they could be offered (if not inside, then outside of prisons).
Analyzing the pros and cons of rehabilitation services and their proven positive effects on a convict’s status in society, as well as their overall post-sentence health, it may seem like the best choice would be to make these services readily available nationwide. So this begs the question: Why aren’t these services offered more consistently? The simple answer would be the aforementioned underfunding of prison systems. But scholars like Bibas believe that the answer stretches deeper than that. One of his main claims is that the true purpose of american prisons has changed significantly:
Historically, colonial America punished crimes swiftly but temporarily. Only a few convicts were hanged, exiled, or mutilated. Most paid a fine, were shamed in the town square, sat in the stocks or pillory, or were whipped; all of these punishments were brief. Having condemned the crime, the colonists then forgave the criminal, who had paid his debt to society and the victim.
That was in keeping with the colonists’ Christian faith in forgiveness, and it meant there was no permanent underclass of ex-cons.
Having said this, Bibas argues that with all the money earned from prisons, financial gain has become the main purpose of imprisonment. From this point of view, it makes sense to point out that more prisoners in cells equals more money for prison corporations. Therefore, by not offering rehabilitation services to convicts, and making it easier for criminals to slip back into criminal habits, prisons systems set their victims up to end up right back in a cell; a cycle that continues to put money in the prison system’s pocket. A theory so controversial as this may shed some light on the mind-boggling statistic that 75% of criminals will end up back in the prison system within 5 years of their initial release.
On the other side of this argument are those who believe such rehabilitation services are unnecessary for prisoners. From this more unforgiving lens, many are a big proponent of freedoms of our society in this country. They believe that it is the criminal’s irresponsible choosing of criminal activity that got them into such a mess, so it shouldn’t be up to society, government or anyone else but themselves to get out of the mess they created. However, it is the people, organizations, and groups/parties with this mindset that tend to look at a criminal’s actions for what they are instead of focusing on the circumstances surrounding it. In the many cases in their respective books, Michelle Alexander and Bryan Stevenson contextualize the crime with the offender’s family, emotional, financial, and whatever other forms of history could affect the individual’s behavior. Although the crimes themselves may be legally inexcusable, the criminals instantly don’t seem as evil, or dangerous as I’m sure they were originally framed to be. It is important to realize that a lot of these offenders are products of their environment, and the circumstances in which they live. So offering little to no help in terms of rehabilitation is about as unfair as the circumstances that a lot of these criminals were born into. In the words of Stevenson, “we all need mercy, we all need justice, and-perhaps- we all need some measure of unmerited grace” (18). And quite frankly, the opposing point of view, whether it be conservatives, or the judicial system, does not often recognize such factors as valid.
Works Cited:
-Rivers, Eileen. “Re-Entry into Society, or Back to Prison?” USA Today, Gannett Satellite Information Network, 31 Dec. 2017, https://www.usatoday.com/story/opinion/policing/reentry/column/2017/12/29/reentry-incarceration-corruption-prison-barriers-recidivism-policing-usa/979903001/.
-ALEXANDER, MICHELLE. NEW JIM CROW: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness. NEW PRESS, 2020.
-Bibas, Stephanos. “The Truth about Mass Incarceration.” National Review, National Review, 2 Oct. 2015, https://www.nationalreview.com/2015/09/mass-incarceration-prison-reform/.
-Miller, Sean. “US Prison Inmates Returning to Society: How Will They Be Received?” The Christian Science Monitor, The Christian Science Monitor, 20 May 2012, https://www.csmonitor.com/USA/Justice/2012/0520/US-prison-inmates-returning-to-society-How-will-they-be-received.
-STEVENSON, BRYAN. JUST MERCY: a Story of Justice and Redemption. SCRIBE PUBLICATIONS, 2020.
Essay 4 Outline
- Introduce the topic, and enter the conversation using Alexander, and Stevenson quotes from their books.
-Convicts never really regain full citizenship after serving their sentences.
-Prison systems have a terrible effect on their prisoners that often leaves them worse than when they entered
-Convicts receive no help at any stage that could help them become functioning members of society after serving their sentence
-The amount of convicts who revert back to old ways/habits, thus keeping them in the prison system is staggering
Possible crux: The American Criminal Justice System does not offer much assistance in allowing citizens to re-enter society, or rehabilitation services for the trauma of jail. But it is proven by statistics that when these things are offered, convicts tend to get their lives back on track, and stay out of jail after serving their first sentence. Does the fact that the criminal justice system STILL isn’t offering any of these things consistently say about their intentions?
Thesis: I think it alludes to the fact that because of the profit received from prisons, the system thrives off of keeping convicts in it. While Eileen Fisher believes that all of american society is failing convicts by not offering assistance, I’d like to specifically call out the government, and heads of the criminal justice system for their absence on this issue.
- Trauma inside prisons and penitentiaries takes a very negative toll on the prisoners, which affects a plethora of aspects of their well-being.
-Living conditions are bad, and promote bad habits, and unhealthy outlets
-Forced, unpaid labor is often implemented instead of job training, counseling, and educational courses, which have worked with prisoners in the past (Sean Miller)
-All this causes deep emotional, physical, and psychological trauma that makes it easy for convicts to slip back into old habits and troublesome ways.
- The situation waiting for convicts when they get out of jail sets them up to easily end up right back in a prison cell.
-Government restrictions awaiting prisoners outside of jail: buying homes, voting, getting jobs with criminal records, overall disapproval and rejection by society (Louisiana high # of restrictions from article)
-When rehabilitation services, and assistance are provided to prisoners (job skills training, education, counseling, therapy, etc), statistics (Miller, Fisher) show that the amount of convicts who remain out of prison systems increases significantly. Yet most state, and federal prison systems fail to implement these systems that would help keep convicts out of trouble and out of their cells.
- The profit received by the higher powers of the criminal justice system may explain their failure to implement services and methods that are proven to be effective?
-Bibas states that the change in purpose of prisons in society has sparked the issues we see today with the criminal justice system. This shift from a system that was designed to punish as a lesson to make the person a better citizen upon returning to society, to more punishment for profit is very problematic in Bibas’ eyes.
-Find Statistics about revenue of prisons both private and government run? See what they suggest about thesis?
- Counterarguments revolve around the fact that prisons and convicts are so well removed from society that people simply don’t care enough to have sympathy for convicts.
-Michelle Alexander talks about how prisons are often strategically placed in isolated areas. This causes people to almost forget about convicts as they serve time.
-Others may remember, but simply don’t care. The general statement is the concept of free choice: “They chose to do the crimes. They got themselves into this mess without our help, so they should be able to get out of it without our help”(Bibas?).
-However a lot of the situations of these criminal help push them towards their criminal actions (products of their environments). DO NOT SPEND MUCH TIME ON THIS TOPIC, STAY ON TRACK.
-Maybe bring in Stevenson’s quote about needing mercy to end rebuttal?
- Conclusion paragraph:
-Restate key points
-Restate crux
-Restate thesis
-Review reasons, and possibly important evidence
Essay #4 Literary Review
My paper will focus on the availability of rehabilitation services offered to convicts both inside and outside of jail to help them re-enter society as best they can. I will look into this and how these programs affect the overall number of convicts that remain in the prison system after serving their sentences. With this in mind, hopefully it will be fitting to ask the question: what does failure to offer these services show about those running our prison system? If this issue was a ballroom, the amount of people in that space that debate this topic would be ridiculously high, as this issue is a key topic in the realm of prison reform. But for my essay, I will focus on the pieces of 5 scholars. With their two groundbreaking books on the prison system, Just Mercy and New Jim Crow, Bryan Stevenson and Michelle Alexander will serve as a strong foundation for this argument. Although they disagree on some things about the nation’s current criminal justice system, both make it clear that they think the system is systematically racist, and doesn’t truly care about the equal treatment of prisoners, especially minority prisoners. Where their arguments differ is that Stevenson still trusts that the system will work once we, as a country address and fix the apparent racism and unequal treatment within it. Alexander, on the other hand, seems to have completely lost faith in the system. In response to Michelle Alexander’s book, Stephanos Bibas writes his article. In a much more neutral, unbiased fashion, Bibas uses his platform to expose truths, and address some of the bias in Alexander’s arguments, as well as the political left side of the spectrum. Bibas then takes time to expose the flaws in the political right side’s arguments as well. His overarching claim appears to be that the criminal justice system has changed its purpose for incarceration to one of profit, explaining a lot of the changes in prison systems. With Bibas’ entrance into the conversation makes way for both Eileen Fisher, and Sean Miller’s pieces. Both focus specifically on criminal’s reentry into society. They believe that not enough is done in this area to help convicts fully regain citizenship.
With this conversation set up, I plan to enter the “ballroom” using Alexander and Stevenson’s pieces as the basis for conversation. They talk about the flaws of the entire justice system, so using them simply to enter that realm of discourse is best. When my essay narrows down to the specific issue of rehabilitation services for criminals, the remaining 3 articles will become the focal points. I will piggyback off of Fisher and Miller’s points to show how little help is being offered to help prisoners re-enter society, how this lack of support affects said prisoners, and what question about the criminal justice system as a whole can be asked with this in mind. Statistics, as well as examples of how financial, educational, vocational, and mental/emotional support can help ease convicts back into society will be used to strengthen the argument. Bibas’ piece will serve as a good balance to ensure that both sides are represented as equal as possible.
Works Cited:
-Rivers, Eileen. “Re-Entry into Society, or Back to Prison?” USA Today, Gannett Satellite Information Network, 31 Dec. 2017, https://www.usatoday.com/story/opinion/policing/reentry/column/2017/12/29/reentry-incarceration-corruption-prison-barriers-recidivism-policing-usa/979903001/.
-ALEXANDER, MICHELLE. NEW JIM CROW: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness. NEW PRESS, 2020.
-Bibas, Stephanos. “The Truth about Mass Incarceration.” National Review, National Review, 2 Oct. 2015, https://www.nationalreview.com/2015/09/mass-incarceration-prison-reform/.
-Miller, Sean. “US Prison Inmates Returning to Society: How Will They Be Received?” The Christian Science Monitor, The Christian Science Monitor, 20 May 2012, https://www.csmonitor.com/USA/Justice/2012/0520/US-prison-inmates-returning-to-society-How-will-they-be-received.
-STEVENSON, BRYAN. JUST MERCY: a Story of Justice and Redemption. SCRIBE PUBLICATIONS, 2020.
Essay 4: Annotated Bibliography
Annotated Bibliography
Issue: What rehabilitation/reentry services are offered to criminals in, and out of jail? How do these services affect the number of criminals that remain in the prison system?
Primary Sources:
-Rivers, Eileen. “Re-Entry into Society, or Back to Prison?” USA Today, Gannett Satellite Information Network, 31 Dec. 2017, https://www.usatoday.com/story/opinion/policing/reentry/column/2017/12/29/reentry-incarceration-corruption-prison-barriers-recidivism-policing-usa/979903001/.
This primary source article talks about USA Today’s Re-Entry Project as they toured some of the United States’ harshest, most populated prisons and interviewed both current and former prisoners. The purpose of these interviews was to find the answer to one question: Is America failing its prisoners? Discussion of this question caused Eileen Rivers and company to look at a number of factors, one of which being rehabilitation services offered to prisoners to help them re-enter society (hence the name of the project). The source analyzes statistics that show these services have had nothing but positive effects in the prison community in all facets. It even has some specific cases to show their effectiveness in different convict’s circumstances. All the arguments, as well as their supposed responses from prisoners they interviewed suggest a common claim: America is failing its prisoners by not making their reentry into society easier through assistance. However, it is very possible that they could’ve very simply excluded any interviews that stated otherwise from the piece in order to prove their point. In terms of a ballroom, this article would be piggybacking off of some of the arguments made by Michelle Alexander, and Bryan Stevenson in their books.
Secondary Sources:
-ALEXANDER, MICHELLE. NEW JIM CROW: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness. NEW PRESS, 2020.
This is one of the books that allows for the topic of my novel to be argued or debated upon in the first place. It is a secondary source book, and it’s discussion of the criminal justice system and its flaws is what will help set up my essay’s arguments. In terms of the actual “ball room” in which this conversation will take place, Alexander’s book will be the work that actually begins the conversation. The statistics and claims made specifically in chapter 5 will help strengthen my argument. However the nature of this whole piece, will definitely call for solid counter arguments to eliminate some of the bias associated with New Jim Crow.
-Bibas, Stephanos. “The Truth about Mass Incarceration.” National Review, National Review, 2 Oct. 2015, https://www.nationalreview.com/2015/09/mass-incarceration-prison-reform/.
This secondary source novel takes a significantly more neutral position on the issue of prison reform. When it comes to what I am discussing, this article’s neutrality and equal representation of the opposing side’s views on the matter will be essential in helping me form counter arguments. Bibas’ thesis claims that the purpose of incarceration has changed to one of gaining profit, which helps explain mass incarceration and a lot of the issues surrounding it. The article responds directly to claims made by Michelle Alexander, which allows for it to be seamlessly incorporated in my “ballroom” in more of a role of disagreement in some ways. It argues that the left has become too soft on criminals, while the right has forgotten what mercy is, and how that is shown in a lot of their suggested respective policies.
-Miller, Sean. “US Prison Inmates Returning to Society: How Will They Be Received?” The Christian Science Monitor, The Christian Science Monitor, 20 May 2012, https://www.csmonitor.com/USA/Justice/2012/0520/US-prison-inmates-returning-to-society-How-will-they-be-received.
This secondary source article has similar viewpoints as Eileen Rivers’ article, which puts it in direct conversation with not only that piece, but Bibas as well. It points out the flaws in society that keep it from being able to willingly accept changed criminals upon completion of their sentences. It also brings in a combination of statistics and special cases that revolve around certain organizations that work with California prisons to rehabilitate convicts. Using this article in tandem with River’s article it will be possible to expose the flaws in each step of the process of rehabilitation and re-entry, as well as prove how well they do work when implemented correctly.
-STEVENSON, BRYAN. JUST MERCY: a Story of Justice and Redemption. SCRIBE PUBLICATIONS, 2020.
In this secondary source book, Bryan Stevenson uses statistics, and specific cases to create a narrative that sheds the American criminal justice system in a negative light. Similar to Alexander’s book, Just Mercy will he one of the books that initiates the whole conversation in the ballroom that I am entering. I will also use the claims and statistics from this book to strengthen the argument that I plan to discuss. Essentially, his book’s main message is that everyone in their life deserves mercy, and these prisoners are no anomaly no matter how severe their actions were in the past.
Essay 4 Topic Proposal
I will write my essay on the post-sentence rehabilitation services that are offered to ex convicts, and how these services can contribute to keeping people in the prison system. No matter the length of the sentence being served, society expects for incarcerated persons to immediately go back to being contributing members to their communities. However, due to extenuating circumstances, many of these convicts never learned the correct way to serve this role even before being convicted. Failure to help set up such scarred and traumatized people allows for them to slip back into what got them imprisoned in the first place (Especially if the activity provides income). Using Bryan Stevenson’s book, and a handful of selected articles, I will explore the issue at hand. I will research the current services that are provided by the government, or private companies to help assimilate ex convicts back into society both inside, and outside of jail (education, jobs, therapy, housing etc.). I will research first-hand accounts on the negative effects prisons have on convicts, and how that affects them as newly freed persons. I will also research statistics regarding the amount of people who remain in the prison system following the serving of their first sentence. Bringing in such evidence to formulate an argument will help answer the question: what is America doing to help ex convicts successfully re-enter society, and how does this affect the amount of people who remain in the prison system even after their first sentence?
A Whole New World: Imagining New Realities in Moshin Hamid’s “Exit West
In his speculative fiction novel, Exit West, Moshin Hamid provides insight into the lives of refugees through the eyes of Saeed, and Nadia; two people from a war torn country in the Middle East. In her article, Eva Menger argues that speculative fiction is the best way for readers to “imagine the world of refugees in ways that in ways that other types of contemporary literature cannot” (Menger 92). With the help of magic doors that allow for characters in the novel to travel between countries in a matter of seconds, Menger claims that Hamid is able to help readers distance themselves “from his or her own world” and “question their reality” (81). As much as I agree with Menger’s claims, it is always possible that Hamid could’ve had different intentions. Menger focuses her analysis on the way in which Hamid uses magic doors to help the reader to sympathize with the refugee experience. But she fails to acknowledge how the magic doors also encourage the reader to truly immerse ourselves in a different world, where these doors are a part of reality. By slowly easing the Saeed and Nadia into the concept of magic doors as means of international travel, Hamid is able to allow the reader to enter a mental state where they can imagine these doors are real.
As the plot continues, the fact that Saeed and Nadia are traveling via magic doors becomes more and more normal. When the couple first decides to take the risk and travel via a magic door, the experience is described in the most detail:
It was said in those days that the passage was both like dying and like being born, and indeed Nadia experienced a kind of extinguishing as she entered the blackness and a gasping struggle as she fought to exit it, and she felt cold and bruised and damp as she lay on the floor of the room at the other side, trembling and too spent at first to stand, and she thought, while she strained to fill her lungs, that this dampness must be her own sweat (Hamid 104).
Detailing Nadia’s physical sensations while going through the portal allows the reader to further immerse themselves in the alternate world that Hamid is creating (especially regarding magic doors). Later in the novel, by the time that Saeed and Nadia have chosen to move from London to San Francisco, the process of going through the door isn’t even described (189). This suggests that the characters have become accustomed to the doors, and accepted them as reality. It is likely that Hamid planned for the readers to follow suit. Thus, showing how he gradually makes the reader immerse themselves in a new world, a new reality.
Along with what is happening with the protagonist’s in the story, Hamid brings in side stories in a very matter-of-fact manner. What’s interesting is the fact that every story Hamid includes includes magic doors in some capacity. Like everything else in the story, Hamid incorporates these ventures from the plot for a reason. From the viewpoint of encouraging the reader to imagine a different world, these anecdotal side stories could serve the same purpose as when Saeed and Nadia use the doors. With that in mind, it makes sense why the side stories follow the same pattern of detailing the door traveling experience less and less as the book progresses. In the very first side story of the book, The man in Australia’s struggle to get through the door silently is explained in great detail. Hamid says, “He wriggled with great effort, his hands gripping either side of the doorway as though pulling himself up against gravity, or against the rush of a monstrous tide” (8). With the same goal of assimilating the reader into the new world, this first side story provides as much detail as the first time that Saeed and Nadia traveled via magic door. As the end of the novel approaches, the very last side story talks about the doors in such a casual way, that it is barely noticeable as a significant part of the story. The story details the life of a widowed maid who really doesn’t have much of a reason to hold on to her current life other than the fact that her daughter still lives in the area. After this experience is detailed, the maid casually thinks, “one day she might go… but not today” (226). The normalcy with which she talks about using a door to travel is almost mind-boggling. However, it shows how common the doors have become to the characters, and consequently, to the readers as well.
Hamid begins the novel by greatly detailing the process of using the doors (in both the main plot and side stories), and showing the character’s reluctance to even use them. But by the time the plot is coming to a close, the magic doors are addressed with a nonchalance that suggests everybody in the book has accepted them as part of their reality. By making this move in the book, Hamid encourages the reader to do the same. As they imagine a different world where international travel is possible by simply walking through a door, readers can then interpret the refugee experience that Hamid is detailing however they choose. Like how J.K. Rowling allowed us to get lost in the possibilities of the “wizarding world of Harry Potter,” Moshin Hamid prompts us to imagine a “world without borders” through the use of magic doors (Menger 80).
Works Cited
-Hamid, Mohsin. Exit West. Penguin Random House, 2017.
-Menger, Eva. “’What It Feels like to Be an Other’: Imaginations of Displacement in Contemporary Speculative Fiction.” Studies in Arts and Humanities, http://sahjournal.com/index.php/sah/article/view/141.